In the spirit of building good relationships with other authors, I agreed to do a swap review with short story author T. L. Sallie. Her story, “The Submerged,” is a twenty page long futuristic romance. I was given a free copy in exchange for this review.
“The Submerged” starts off by introducing us to Phillip Hoffman Jr, a single man living in London. He has lost his job of eight years and doesn’t know quite what to do with himself. Because of his lack of income, he has moved into an apartment on the ground level, which is under three feet of water.
In this futuristic setting, the polar ice caps have melted so much that the sea levels are higher than they’ve ever been and are flooding coastal cities all over the world. Civilization has adapted to this inconvenience by raising the blocks of building foundations every few months, and by creating water-proof items (clothes, furniture, gadgets, etc). There is even floating furniture and cars in this story. Anyone who can’t afford floating transportation has the option of phoning a ferry or using whatever inflatable device they have at home to maneuver the streets, now rivers.
The premise alone is unique and interesting. It made me think of the poor people affected by the hurricanes, especially the people in Houston who suffered from flooding. How does life go on? How is a new norm developed when there’s so much water everywhere? At least the people in the story had the latest technology on their side to make things a little easier.
Anyway, Phillip ventures out of his apartment for the first time in a long time and runs into his neighbor, a young lady named Clara. After exchanging pleasantries, Phillip gathers his courage and asks her out on a date. The rest of the story tells about their evening. Clara turns out to be a straight-forward girl who pursues difficult topics of conversation and states her honest opinion without fear. Phillip, who is a little unsure of himself and insecure about the fact that he hasn’t been on a date in a long time, is drawn to Clara’s blunt personality and pretty brown eyes. Through the ups and downs of the evening, he falls in love with her. Whether the feelings are reciprocated or not is unclear. The ending comes quite suddenly, leaving the reader wondering what could’ve happened to this odd couple had the story continued.
The story could’ve done with another round of edits to get rid of unnecessary adjectives and adverbs, but was otherwise enjoyable. I liked its originality and the descriptions of this futuristic London with its unique water problem. The character of Clara is truly one I’ve never come across before. The author had me guessing what she was going to do or say next.
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